This poem is about suicide. It is fiction and does not reflect my views on suicide. I hope I do not  offend anyone with this poem, and if I do I let me know and I’ll take it down. 🙂


With a bullet to the head

Shadow Wreath
Shadow Wreath (Photo credit: jeff_golden)

I end what is now

To begin what

Is unknown.

The fog of naïvety

Cloud over judgment

Only to clear away

When all is done and gone

Leaving only guilt






All that is sought

Is not found

Shadows surround the vessel

That carried a withered soul

That was me

I cannot shout


Don’t go

Don’t leave me

I changed my mind

Come back

They leave


Alone with only my thoughts


Pondering on old regrets

Broken hearts

Hurtful words

How useless now

What a waste


What was the use?

What did I achieve?

Questions old and new

Never to be answered

Soon I join the mute

Who voices and screams

Are never heard

Truly gone and forgotten


Thrust into new cages

I spend eternity living

What should have been

What could have been

I ended Incomplete.

8 thoughts on “Incomplete

  1. Wow Soad! This is truly great writing! And I know it’s a touchy subject for some people, but I always think you should be able to write anything you want, it’s your blog after all! And it’s really amazing what you wrote! You’ve got some real talents to bring feelings across! 🙂

    • wow! Thank you for you feedback 🙂 I didnt want to offend anyone because it is such a touchy subject and I wouldnt be able to sleep at night knowing my poetry hurt someone

      • I understand that completly! But you didn’t contain any personal opinions in this poem, so how can you upset anyone? It still happans every day and I really think we shouldn’t hide these things in the dark. I think that by being open about these kind of subjects (doesn’t mean you have to have lived these feelings, I think) we can help some people out there who’ve been thinking about this one day and we can try to support them!

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